Area A: Text
1. The text of a children's book is usually organized into simple sentences and short paragraphs.
How is the text organized in the book that you have chosen to review? Explain whether this
organization was sufficient for the story that this book is telling.
This children's book is organized with simple sentences in short paragraphs. For each living organism, there are two paragraphs describing the organism. In each paragraph, there are 3-4 sentences. Also, on the introductory page to each living organism, there are two clues to give a hint to what the next page will describe. This is to gain student interest so they can relate to the content material. This is a higher level children's book due to the fact that the vocabulary is at a higher level.
2. Children's book authors often employ literary tools to help make the story more vivid in the readers minds. Commonly used literary tools are rhythm, alliteration, repetition, refrains, onomatopoeia, simile, personification, rhyme, and imagery. Identify three different areas in the text where a literary tool has been employed. For each example you identify, state the type of literary tool that is used and how the employment of the tool helps support the story.
Repetition-Each introductory page for the living organism has some of the same key words. For example, each page contains "Look very closely". This is to help capture the reader's attention and tells the reader what he or she should be looking at next. Also, each page contains "What could it be?" This is so the reader is taking a guess at what the next living organism is by using the clues given. This is so the reader is active while reading this book. It keeps the reader actively engaged.
Refrain-At the end of each page where the author is introducing the new living organism, he uses the sentence, "What could it be?" This helps keep the student engaged because it allows the student to guess what the next living organism is by using the small snippet of the picture that is given.
Rhythm-On the pages that introduce the new living organism, they have the exact same number of syllables on each introductory page. This helps the reader read the picturebook easily because they understand that it has a rhythm and it makes it more engaging as well.
3. Identify two areas in the text that use a question or other device to help move the reader to the next page.
Each introductory page asks: "What do you see?" This helps the reader look at the picture and explain what he or she sees.
Each introductory page asks: "What could it be?" This helps the reader make a guess at what living organism he or she sees. This helps the reader move to the next page to see what living organism is being represented.
Area B: Illustrations
1. Some picture books have an illustration on the front cover that presents the main conflict or point of the story. Identify two or more elements from the front cover of the book you are reviewing and explain how they relate to the story.
The entire cover is made of shells that are found along a sea shore. The one shell on the front cover is a conch shell and the story explains the characteristics of a queen conch. The shells are representing the organisms that live within them. Also, the "O" in shore is made up of an organism. It looks like it is supposed to represent a sand dollar; however, I am not positive of this.
2. What is the primary medium (collage, drawings, photographs, etc.) used in the illustrations?
The primary medium used in the illustrations is photographs.
3. Identify the illustration that in your opinion is the most effective in developing the story as a whole. Explain how two or more elements in the illustration help support and develop the story.
The illustration that is most effective in developing the story as a whole is the the illustrations found on the pages that introduce the next living organism. I feel that they are most effective because the illustrations are an up close image of just a portion of the living organism. It captures the reader's attention and the reader wants to move on and read about the living organism. An example is below. The reader would never guess that this is a sea anemone; however, the image captures the reader's attention.
4. Identify two elements that are repeated throughout a majority of the illustrations. Explain how these elements support the story.
Crop and Reveal Format-Each introductory picture is framed. A piece of the living organism is captured in a frame and is zoomed in on to increase the interest of the reader. It draws the student's attention to the creatures and objects that the student would find along the shore.
Photographs-The author uses real-life photographs to represent the living organism. This allows students to see the real characteristics of each living organism that is presented throughout the picturebook.
5. Find an example of how the images and text work together to create irony. metaphor and/or metonymy. Insert a screeen shot of the example into your blog.
The author is comparing the image of to green eels as well as monster fingers (metaphor).
Green Eels
Monster Fingers
Area C: Characterization
1. What is the easily identifiable dominant trait of the story's main character?
The story's main characters are the living organisms that are found along the shore. The dominant trait is that all the living things are found along the shore at a beach.
2. Identify a character trait of the main character that is established through the text.
A trait of all the living organisms is that they live along the sea shore. All the living things live in the water found near the sea shore and the living things are brought to shore through the tides of the ocean.
3. Identify a character trait of the main character that is established through the illustrations.
A character trait of the main characters (living organisms found on the shore) is that they are being represented in their natural habitat. The photographs that the author uses are photographs of the actual organisms living in their natural habitats. They are not photographs of living things that have washed ashore due to the waves.
4. Identify two character traits of the main character that young children identify or sympathize
with.
Two character traits that young children identify with is that these are living things that they could find along a shore of a beach. Another trait that they identify with is what role the living organism play in a larger ecosystem the inter-tidal pool of an ocean.
5. What was the main problem that the main character faces in the book? How is this problem similar to a problem that most children have faced before?
This is an informational text. This book allows the reader to be the main character who is guessing what living organism is being represented. When children go to the beach, they are curious about what is located on the shore of the beach. Thus, this allows them to indulge their curiosity about the organisms found on the shore of the beach.
6. Sometimes a children's book character will solve the main conflict on his or her own. How did the character in the book you selected turn to self-reliance to solve the main conflict of the story?
Since this is an informational text, there is not necessarily a conflict. The purpose of this book is to take the reader on a journey to explore images of living things found at the shore. Often, the reader will overlook pieces of the photographs. This type of book allows the reader to use problem-solving skills while rediscovering living organisms found near the shore and recognizing the beauty and art of the structure of the living organism. Thus, the student is relying on their prior knowledge to guess the identity of the living organism found near the shore.
Citations
www.frankserafini.com. (n.d.). Looking Closely. Retrieved June 27, 2014, from
http://www.frankserafini.com/picturebooks.html